michaeljordahl in poetry January 16, 2023 18 Words

old age (senryu)

old age is much like

driving down to the big lake

with rusty brake lines

–photo by me

6 thoughts on “old age (senryu)”

Richard Reeve says:

January 17, 2023 at 12:11 am

Mine totally feels like no brake pads!

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1. michaeljordahl says:
  
  January 17, 2023 at 2:20 am
  
  We can always drag our feet like the flintstones!!
  
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Richard Reeve says:

January 17, 2023 at 2:21 am

Think we might see another day for another photo/poem if we revert to walking.

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Mark Wade says:

January 18, 2023 at 7:13 pm

true that

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Flowerpoet says:

January 21, 2023 at 7:10 am

Thanks for the good belly laugh Michael! 😂

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1. michaeljordahl says:
  
  January 21, 2023 at 2:23 pm
  
  You’re very welcome, Shelley!!
  
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