the season had ended
the leaves had descended
and I was to rake
them away
so I went out at dawn
to my leaf-covered lawn
when a favorable wind
came my way
now my leaves were
blown high
in the blustery sky
while I leaned on my rake
all the day
and I think that it’s been
quite a favorable wind
but my neighbors don’t
see it that way
This is gorgeous. I love the imagery and the character actually just enjoying nature. There are so many meanings. 🧡
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Thank you much!
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I too love the imagery here also the rythm and rhyme. I’m enjoying your autumnal poems!
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Thank you, Mei!
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Ha…made me smile!
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Thank you, Sandy!
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Beautiful and true for us too! Tee-hee 🙂
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I know! Leaves everywhere. Thanks, Tom.
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Beautiful poem! I love the humor in it.
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Thanks, Winnie, leaves everywhere!
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You’re welcome! Hahaha.
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